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Thursday, November 07, 2019

NaBloPoMo No. 6

I have hit 50k on my project for NaNoWriMo and I think I am about half finished with the story. I still have no idea what the hell I am doing. It's a fantasy novel based off of some fanfiction I've been writing. Now I have this debate, do I try to finish this novel or do I pick up another project and work on it. I am leaning towards finishing this novel. Because these characters are stuck in my head. Excerpt of what I'm working on beneath the jump.


The Duke fell quiet as Hela and Brynhildr came near them. The Marquess's face was alight with happiness and joy. Gunnar found himself wistfully thinking of the day she learned that he was noble born as well and how her face lit up in a similar manner. “Father, for the wedding feast, we ask that there be a hunt and game for all to eat,” Hela said cheerfully, “It is a small request and I know how much you enjoy hunting. The day is early yet, perhaps it might be possible.” The Duke thought about it and looked over at Ivar who sat idly tumbling dice in a cup.

“Ivar!” he called, “Let us go in search of a stag!” Ivar bolted to his feet and snapped off a salute reflexively before going to prepare a hunting party. Gunnar covered his guffaw at his brother's reflexive salute with a cough and looked over to see the Duke's eyes dancing with amusement. “I will never tire of putting him in surprise like that,” the Duke confessed quietly before chuckling. “Ride with me. The other Intendents will be curious about you and I'm sure have much to advise you upon,” he said to Gunnar.

Gunnar gave a small smile and nod. The Duke clapped his hands and eyes turned to him. “Summon the chamberlin, the butler, and the vinter.” A servant scurried off to find the three people. Nearby the Maragrave sat talking quietly with the Marquess and his ward. As the three men summoned approached, the Duke turned to the Maragrave. “I presume that you had plans for this the whole time,” he said. The Maragrave smiled and gave a small shrug. “Well, inform them of what you need. I and my party shall find some game for tonight and tomorrow,” the Duke said, “The gods have been kind today. They've granted us victory. We shall make merry and celebrate. Tomorrow we celebrate the union of the house of Erick Bearsbane with the house of Morgan Shieldbreaker.”

Ivar walked briskly into the great hall as the Duke stood and stepped down from the dais. Gunnar walked at the Duke's side as the Duke told Ivar to find the other Intendents. Soon, they were mounted and on their way into the wood. Ivar's beaters laughed and joked with each other. The hounds strained at their leashes eager to chase anything that moved. Ivar, for his part, was scouring the path they followed into the wood for tracks. Soon he found something. Ivar began to jog along the path as the beaters quieted and fanned out behind him. The hounds picked up a scent and began to bay. The beaters slipped the leads on the hounds and moved aside for the mounted hunters to come forward. As Gunnar rode past Ivar, he leaned down and reached out a hand. Ivar took it and vaulted on to the horse behind Gunnar. The brothers rode swiftly down the path. As they passed by one of the servants that was part of the party, carrying spears, Ivar pulled one from his bundle.

“What do you think it is?” Gunnar shouted to his brother. Ivar kept an eye on the path and listened to the hounds ahead of them. The wind shifted and that was when the smell hit them. “Ah, gods,” Gunnar groaned, “Not another sounder.”

“I think there's just one boar,” Ivar shouted. The Duke who was riding beside Gunnar looked over at Ivar. “Just beyond the rise, I think it's there,” Ivar called, pointing forward with the spear. The Duke held out his right hand. Ivar tossed the spear to the Duke, who caught it easily. He smiled at his master of the hunt and surged ahead.

“Odin's eye, he's as mad as Brynhildr,” Gunnar breathed as they popped over the rise just behind the Duke to find him facing an enormous boar. Laughing, the Duke charged the boar and stabbed it with the spear before wheeling away as the boar came after the horse. He did this again and again, enraging the deadly animal. Gunnar passed his bow back to Ivar, who strung the weapon and drew an arrow from his brother's quiver. Firing over Gunnar's shoulder, Ivar struck the boar in the side. The boar's attention shifted from the Duke to the brothers on the horse. It gave a powerful bellow before charging at them.

Ivar fired two more arrows in rapid succession as Gunnar wheeled the horse around. One of them struck the boar in the eye as the other struck it in the shoulder. The boar whipped its head back and forth. The Duke dismounted and approached the injured beast. He thrust the spear deep into the boar's side before drawing his knife. With a ferocious snarl, the Duke wrestled with the boar until he was able to slash it across the throat. A great fount of blood sprayed out over the Duke as the boar dropped to the earth.

The Duke laughed as the remainder of the hunting party arrived. Ivar dismounted and handed Gunnar his bow. “Now, that was a challenge,” the Duke laughed, motioning over one of the men with the party who had a wineskin. The man gave the Duke his wineskin. As Ivar looked the boar over, he gave a low whistle. It was big and black with impressively large tusks.

“I think we found the old boar,” Ivar said. The Duke grinned and nodded as he passed the wineskin to Ivar. “The unmaking will be a task. I'm not sure if we'll be able to carry the meat back. This is one big boar.”

“We'll build a sledge and carry the carcass with the horses. This should fetch enough for a few days meat,” Gunnar said. The Duke looked at the other Intendents of the North and the South. They looked somewhere between disappointed and frustrated with the prospect of their coursers being used as pack animals. Ivar took a drink and passed the wineskin back to the Duke. He then motioned over his crew. As they began the process of the unmaking, the Duke walked up to his Intendent of the North.

“You look troubled, my friend,” he said, “What ails your mind?”

“It is a long walk back to the castle,” he answered. The Duke chuckled and slapped the man on the knee. He passed the wineskin back to the Intendent of the North.

“You won't be walking alone,” the Duke said jovially, “And I'm sure that the Maragrave will send riders out to meet us on our way back. After the business of the last several days, I can't see him doing otherwise.”


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